Once a pon a time there was a little girl called zoe going on a walk around the rocky ocean,her parents had no idea about this.Zoe did this quite a lot she loved goinjg on adventures/.
This particular night the sea seemed to be quite rough.Zoe got scared the waves were crashing and tumbling adn she was just about to fall in when a ship came and saved her!
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Hi Amber I'm Taleah and I love you story about Zoe but maybe you could fix the going and the upon but the rest of the story was awesome keep it up
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